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Herbstbild
Dies ist ein Herbsttag,
wie ich keinen sah!
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I like it because it tells you, in short, all the changes you see in Autumn. Adam N. I like the way the poet describes the image of the autumn very clearly therefore making the poem more interesting to read. Vlad K I think the poem is good because it tells us the changes that happen in autumn Eric Murphy This poem adds an atmosphere around you and makes you think that you are there. The words in the poem add depth and personality to the poem James Bramble I like the way the writer uses
'Breathing free" showing how the air was still in a good descriptive
way. James O'D.
Malik O. The poet explains the day and that the air is breathing free. He asks us not to disturb the beauty of nature and not to disrupt it. And in the last verse he tells us that it is summer and that the ripe fruit is falling from the trees. Muhammed S. The poem is enjoyable as it has a rhyme and tone that flows easily off the tongue. I also enjoyed the way the poem depicts the peacefulness of nature. I finally enjoyed the simplicity of the poem. Eoin B.
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I liked how the
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Im Nebel Seltsam,
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In the Mists Wondrous to wander
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Karl Hermann
Hesse, a Swiss- German writer, was born on 2 July 1877 in Calw (Württemberg).
Throughout his life he was a writer and poet. Hesse grew up in a Christian
missionary family in the northern Black Forest. His father, a doctor,
came from Estonia. His mother was born in India. Hesse attended boarding
school in Basel Mission. When the family moved back to Calw, he attended
a grammar school. In 1895 he started an apprenticeship as a book seller.
His best-known literary works are Steppenwolf, Siddhartha, Peter Camenzind, Demian, The Fog, Narcissus and Goldmund, and The Glass Bead Game Hermann Hesse was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature in the year 1946 and in 1954 he received the Order Pour Le Merite for Science and Arts. Karl Hermann Hesse died on 9 August 1962 at the age of 85 years in Montagnola in Switzerland.
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It's a very emotional poem. At the start he is happy and at the end he is alone and sad. It is a good poem but it would be better if it were longer Aaron I like the poem, the way the poet uses phrases and words like 'wondrous to wander through mists'. It is a short poem, but I like it because it rhymes. It is a hard poem to understand but if you read it a few times you can understand it a lot better. Adam C I like the way the poem rhymes, it makes it much better. I like the way the poem is short but it is still good. I like the line "parted are bush and stone." Adam N This poem is very interesting. I like this poem because every second line rhymes and because it is short and good. Adrian I think the poem is boring and too short. I think the fellow in the poem is a loner and has no friends. The poem has a good use of rhyme. Anthony I think the poem
has good rhyming but it's too short and boring. Cian I thought he must have no friends and he is a loner. The rhymes are good. Curtis It is a good poem, it rhymes a lot and it is short. There's nothing wrong with it except it is difficult to understand. But it is very good overall. Dan O
Dylan I enjoyed this poem as it was short but had a deep meaning. The poem uses the mist as a metaphor for the growing apart of the poet and his friends. The mist "parts the bush and the stone". This is a perfect example of this metaphor. The line "only sages fathom the darkness to fall, which separates all" means only wise men truly understand the slow termination of a friendship and why the "mist" forms. The poet was able to condense my long explanation into a short and meaningful stanza. Eóin B
Eoin K I like this poem because every second line rhymes. The poem is short and it still has a good theme to it. I like the line "wondrous to wander through mists " Eric I don't think
the poem is that good because it is very short. The second reason I think
the poem is not good because dumb people don't get it. I think the poem
has some good emotional moments and this poem is sad from the start to
the finish.
This poem isn't too bad because it has good phrases. I'd say it would be hard to put it into a film. It is shorter than the others and the way it is put together is interesting. It isn't the easiest to understand but it is a good poem that is short and sweet. James O It shows that he likes to walk alone in a nice quite place and pretty flowers and mists. I like the rhymes. It seems to talk about people who are alone. Joshua
Leon In the Mists is a good poem and is a different poem. It uses good phrases and good words like "Wondrous to wander through mists". The poem also rhymes well. It was hard to understand it at first but I got then got it. Malik I think the poem is good because it shows emotion. It is sad at the start and sad at the end. But it should be longer because it is very short. It should have been explained.
It sets off a sad emotion. It has a strong connection with nature at the beginning. I think, because the way the poem was written, the author had an emotional phase. Stephen I don't like this poem because it is too hard to understand. If a person wants to writ a poem, he should write it with the real meaning not some fake writing no one understands. The second reason I don't like it is that it is very short and boring. It doesn't describe the mist. The poem is meant to be about the mist but it does not describe it at all. Tobi
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Nic dwa razy Nic dwa razy sie nie
zdarza
Chocbysmy uczniami
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Nothing Twice Nothing can ever happen
twice.
No day copies yesterday,
The next day, though
you're here with me,
Why do we treat the
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It is a good poem but it doesn't rhyme that much. It is saying no day is the same so make the most of every day. I like the title because it makes sense. Aaron It's a confusing poem but good in a sense that it uses intelligent words. I don't like it as much as some other poems that I have read, but it uses good phrases like, 'one day, perhaps some idle tongue'. I don't like the way the speaker says nothing can happen twice because it can. I would rate the poem 7/10. Adam C I like the poem but at the start I didn't fully understand what it was about. It is good the way the poem rhymes; that makes it good. But I also don't like it because it is hard to know what is it about. Adam N It's a good poem but has some difficult words. I like this poem. I don't understand the start very well. Adrian I don't agree with the poem; but I get the point. But still the poem is bit boring. Anthony I think the poem is very interesting and the rhyming is very good. I think it is too long. I agree with the central idea. Cian Curtis I like this poem because it's a good idea for a poem. It is something I hadn't heard before. It says you have got to live life to the max because you won't get a chance to repeat it. Damian I don't like this poem because it is very long. I don't like this poem because it feels more like a short story than a poem. I don't like this poem because it hasn't got much rhythm. Dylan B
I think it was a very good well-written poem. Eoin K I like this poem because it tells us how short life is and that we should live it TO THE MAX. I don't think it is appropriate to call people dunces in poems. Eric I think this poem is good because it has a good rhythm to it. The bad thing about it is that it can get you confused. The good thing about it is that it is emotional. Ionathan The poem was enjoyable because it kept you in it. It was a very depressing poem and might be hard to make into a movie. It is good because it explains how we must love life. James B I didn't like this poem because I thought the idea of it was poor. The only good thing about this poem was it rhymed. Other then that I didn't like it much. I disagree with the idea of nothing happens twice. Lots of things can happen twice. James O I like it because it has a good message that you only live once. The poem is a good poem to read and relax to. It has some nice encouraging words. Joshua I don't like this poem because it is very racist to dunces. It is a kind of funny poem. It is very different to what we usually do. Leon It is a confusing poem but good in the sense that it uses intelligent words. You can do some things twice. So what I am saying is that the poet is right and wrong. She mentions kisses a lot in the poem, in the examples, and I think the poem is well written using nice examples and phrases. 'No day copies another day/no two nights will teach what bliss is'. That is my favourite part. Malik I don't like the poem because it's long and boring. It has good emotion and explains everything. It tells us you only have a chance to do something once. Muhamed I think it is very good because she explains what she is saying in different meanings. She says you cannot do something twice. But you can. But she means the same way you did it before, like doing a test then repeating it. But you won't do it the same way you did it before. So, overall, it is good the way she writes about stuff. She says we should not regret what we did yesterday, if we did something bad; she says we should just enjoy our day as we go along. Dan O It's a bit hard to understand, a bit slow, but I liked it. Paul I think the poem's very bliss with the context it's written in. It sets a sad emotion with the words used. I think the author has a sad emotional setting to everything she writes. Stephen C I like this poem but it is really hard to understand. The second reason I like it is it really tells us what we cannot do twice. It does rhyme so that tells us that a poem can rhyme and be long and still be good. Tobi It is not a great poem but I like it because it rhymes unlike the last poem. It tells us to make the most of life which kind of makes it inspirational. I don't like it because it is hard to understand and the poet doesn't use direct words. Vlad
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I like this poem because it
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Strainul Era duminica-ntr-amiaza,
La cruce,-n deal,
noi îl vazuram
Când s-a pornit
încet la vale,
Ne-a zis c-ar vrea
la sfânta slujba
Când a plecat,
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The Stranger It
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saw, at the cross on the hill,
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1907
- He edited the magazine "Our country", turned into a party
newspaper. He was accused by Austro-Hungarian authorities of publishing
political articles, which is why they brought a series of trials in the
press following which he was sentenced to prison. May
5, 1938 - In Castle Park in Ciucea the poet suffered a stroke and went
into a coma.
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It is too long. It is religious , you know, some of us aren't the same religion as they are. It doesn't rhyme. And that's good in a way Damian A This poem is very hard to read. It is very long. The poem is well written but there are some difficult words. It is very holy. Adrian P It is sort of a boring poem nothing really interesting happens. It is a confusing poem in a way. Who is the man? Nothing really is explained. Aaron H I like the story in the poem the way the poet has written it. It is a long poem and I think that is a positive thing, because some poems are too short, but the poet has got it just right for me. Adam C I like the way they talked
about the man at the start of the poem. Adam N. I think this poem isn't good. It drags out and is boring. There is nothing I can say about it that I like. Anthony M I thought the poem was very interesting. I thought the poem was sad because the stranger was poor and had no house. The poem is very well written. Eoin K I think The Stranger is boring because it is too long. Cian R It is a very good poem and very interesting as well. Over all it's a good poem, very long and interesting. Dan O
Eric M I disliked this poem because it is a bit long and poems get boring after a while. I liked this poem because it has great depth that expresses the feelings very well. It is a long poem and will be pretty easy to make a movie with it. James B This poem has a good story to it which was interesting and it was a poem I enjoyed. I like at the end when it lets you think what happens next. I think it could have a bit better title. James O.
Joshua O
Leon M The Poem is a sad poem of man who is a stranger to the town. It is a happy sort of poem but he is very sad.. The poem has many good phrases and has very good vocabulary. The poem is very good and very touching.. An example of a good phrase in the poem is 'Stood humble and devout Jesus'. Malik O I think the stranger is sad in a way because no body knows him and he has nobody to talk to or tell his problems to. Muhammed S It doesn't make that much sense to me and I didn't like it much but it is ok. Paul P. I like the poem because it
is a mysterious poem and it really describes the stranger. The second
reason I like the poem is that it has a bit of Christianity in it. Most
other poems don't. Tobi A I think the poem was written by a very educated person with the immaculate words they used. I'd say the poem was about a very religious figure. The poem is also quite insightful with the words that the author used . Stephen C
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"The Stranger" by
Octavian Goga is a very original poem, and is perfect to be transformed
into a movie. I liked this poem because it shows the life of the peasants
of those old times. The stranger is presented in a unique mode, from childhood
to maturity.
I like this poem because it
has beautiful lyrics and in it is presented the life of a man with a lot
of problems, who leaves in memories.
I liked this poem because
its full of realism and has a special theme, a impressing one for us,
Romanians. The action is described in a special mode, full of expression. I chose this poem
because I liked the mode the author transposed into words the love of
the parents for they're child.
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Octavian Paler was born in Lisa, Brasov County. He was educated at Spiru Haret High School in Bucharest. In the summer of 1944, just one week before graduating the 7th grade, he was forced to leave the school because of an argument with his uncle and Spiru Haret's school head master. Octavian Paler moved on to Radu Negru High School in Fagaras, where he studied literature for his final examination. He graduated in 1945 with magna cum laude and outstanding results in philosophy, Latin and Greek. He sat the final examination in Sibiu in the same year. Octavian Paler went on to study Philosophy and Law at the University of Bucharest. Octavian Paler was a substitute
member in the Central Committee of the Romanian Communist Party from 1974
to 1979, and a member of the Great National Assembly for the Vaslui constituency,
from 1980 to 1985. However, he was persecuted by the Romanian secret service
agency, the Securitate, because of his pro-western views and criticism
of Romanian Communist Party, including Nicolae Ceausescu. He was not allowed
to leave his home and suffered restrictions in his artistic work. He died of a heart attack on May 7 2007 at the age of 80. He was buried with military honours in the Sfânta Vineri cemetery.
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I like the poem because it tells us what we have time for in life. It also gives examples of what we can use our time for. Overall the poet is a good poet because he came up with the idea of writing a poem about what we can do in life. Adam C I like this poem because it shares a good point. The poem rhymes so I like things that rhyme. It has a good point - we have all the time in the world so don't rush anything. Aaron I like the line "to regret we made an error and to err again." I like the way the poem is not too long nor too short. I like the way in most of the lines he says, "we have time " Adam N This poem is good The poem is interesting. The poem has some hard words but it is good. Adrian I think the poem has a good tempo but it is pure boring and drags on and there is nothing really good about it, apart from the tempo. Anthony
Damian It is a very good poem. It shows the things we have time for in life and the ones we don't. I don't think it's bad at all. It is a very good poem to read. Overall its very good. I think the poet should have showed more things we don't have time for; but it is still good. Dan I don't like this poem because he uses a lot of the same words. I don't like this poem because it has no life in it. I don't like this poem because it hasn't got a good plot. Dylan
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Eric I think this poem is a good poem because it explains how life is precious. I like this poem because it tells us to spend time doing stuff and not to do nothing. James B I don't really like the poem because it doesn't have a story to it. It was long and it went on about nearly the same thing. The ending was good because it was the best lines in the poem. James O What I liked about this poem is it starts with the same words in nearly every sentence: "We have time " What I don't like about this poem is it is depressing. Ionatan I like the poem because of the creative ideas of the poet. I don't like the way the poet uses the same kind of language meaning saying "We have time " too many times. I like the creative fusion created by the poet. Joshua This poem reminds me of my granddad. I don't know why. It's like a picture of him pops up into my head. This poem is a sad poem. This poem makes me feel sad inside. Leon I like the poem because it is a sensible poem and lets us take time to think about time. It also uses good examples of what we use our time with. Overall the poet is a smart person to write this poem with the help of God. Malik It is good because it has emotion. It is long and says what people do. It tells us how short life is . Muhammed S A bit slow, in my opinion. Paul
Stephen I like the poem because it really tells us about what we do with the time we have. The last thing we are meant to do, we can't do it because at that time we die. The poem is long as well. I like long poems. Tobi I like this poem because it starts with the same words in nearly every sentence. I don't like it because it is kind of depressing. Vlad
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